文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;能够使用一些不错的从句;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Civilized manners is very important in international intercourse,so we should form a good habit. To improve national quality help China to form a stable social environment,I often say some people litter in the park,and I also say many people don't ride in turn of civilization.That made me very sad. I hope people can know the importance of civilization,and let us together to protect the social stability.