2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

It is universally acknowledged that excessive packaging of goods become a prevailling phenomena,such as mooncake box.Goods packaged more beautifully with the same quality. As far as i am concerned,excessive packaging of goods become popular because people like beautiful things. You may think that the mooncake have a quality problem because of bad packaging.On the other hand,businesses consider that more beautiful the goods look,more people it can attract to buy it so that they can earn more money. In my point of view,nothing is more important than to make everyone think more highly of the quality than the packaging,In addition,business should produce goods with good quality and normal packaging in order to protect our environment.Only in this way,can we have a more healthy life