高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；从句使用不够丰富，且部分句子有错误；连词使用偏少。

Many years ago, my hometown is a beautiful town. There are lofty mountains and clear brook, brook and many lovely fish in the swim. The mountains of trees, birds in the forest happily called the joy of flying, small animal who lives in harmony with.On the outskirts of a large lawn and fields, the herdsmen of sheep on the grass, the farmers working in the fields. Now, the village built many factories, the stream became dirty, trees were cut down, animal are gone. People are out of work, the environment is polluted also nobody tube. Now, environmental protection is very important, otherwise my beautiful hometown will no longer exist!