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At the same time,it is necessary for us to improve the quality and culture of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication. I notice that sometimes some young people don't behave properly in our daily lives.For example,spitting in public places can be seen somewhere.The lawns are entered in the park although it is not right to do so.The flowers in public garden are picked. What is worse ,rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street . In my opinion,these bad behaviors will make bad impressions upon visitors to China . So every one of us should form good habits from now on.