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文章词汇使用比较恰当，学术词汇积累不足；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
A car is a symbol of modern society. It makes our life more comfortable. It’s also very cool and fashionable, and attracts much attention. First there more and more families own a car or more.Because it's more convenient to hang out when u have car. u can go anywhere u want and no need to worry about u will miss the train or bus and then wait for a long time.otherwise there are more and more people get rich now. The cars r not like before that only a few people can buy.And some people think get a car is a sign that u r one of the rich guys.But as we all know the Car exhaust lead the problem of Global Warming.And too manys cars in the road cause the Traffic jam. another problem is we need more place to parking the cars. The cars Occupy more space with our public space.But every coin has two sides. Cars make the air polluted and careless driving causes traffic problems. Every year many people die in road accidents. And my opinion is cars bring us the convenient but it also bring the Environmental issues.In the long term i think we should contral the number of cars.we cant stop that more and more families own a car but we need consider the problem that cause from cars.
