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Should College Student Hire Cleaners? Recently, some college students hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning for their dorm, which leads to a heated debate. Perhaps someone would agree this deed but in my view, college students shouldn't hire cleaners. First, the employment of a cleaner may have risk. Because we cannot ensure whether the employee is decent or not. What if he or she is a thief under the cover of cleaner? In that case, everyone in the dorm building will suffer. Besides, as college students, we should cultivate the habit of doing chores by ourselves. College is not only a place for us to grasp knowledge but a place to learn how to live on your own. We must have the capicity of living on our own. Therefore, college students shouldn't hire cleaners but do chores on thier own. Only the can a student be a successful student in college.
