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4. 参考词汇：China dream，come true ,achieve one’s dreams., give up， hold on to, make up of
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Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very major or they can also be minor. In fact,a big dream is made up of many small dream. My name ¡s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist，and I want invent a lot of things.From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won't give it up. I must get it over. I'm sure it's very crucial to dream. Some dreams are more realistic. No matter what our dreams are,and we should e should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.
