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Dear George, There are so many hotel,Single room per day 30 yuan. A double room per day 20 yuan. Meals per day is 20 yuan.I think that is so cheap for you.You can host family and residents eat Chinese food together,Of course you also can cook by themselves.And you can go bathing, swimming, mountain climbing.So close you can understand Chinese, can also feel the family atmosphere.