2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

It is universally acknowledged that excessive packaging of goods become prevailing phenomena,such as mooncake box.Goods packaged more beautifully with the same quality. As far as i am concerned,excessive packaging of goods become popular because people like beautiful things. You may think that the mooncake have a quality problem because of bad packaging.On the other hand,businesses consider that more beautiful the goods look,more people it can attract to buy it so that they can earn more money. In my point of view,nothing is more important than to make everyone think more highly of the quality than the packaging,In addition,business should be forced to produce goods with good quality and normal packaging in order to protect our environment.Only in this way,can we have a more healthy life