高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

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Dear Jam， Immediately is the Mid-Autumn festival，let me introduce you to the Mid-Autumn festival on customs. Mid-Autumn festival is a traditional Chinese festival.In this day chinese family are reunion，People want to have dinner with family，and eat the moon cake together.Finlly people will look at the moon together，in the festival people will very happy.And I hope you can have a good time.