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山东济宁邹城一中高一上学期期末英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:27浏览次数:2587
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根据以下提示,结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
Encouragement from a friend plays a very important role in motivating you to solve the problems you are facing.It helps you fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable situation you are stuck in.
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       Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.          
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Friends is very important for us, because of the friends we can get a lot of encouragement from their midst, when we are in trouble, friends encourage can let us out of the woods,That time I very poor exam by the teacher scolded, the mood is very poor, doesn't make any effort in class, not paying attention to listen then my friend gave me advice, comfort me, encouraged me, let me in a good mood many, gradually out of the shadows.

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