5.可适当增加细节,使内容连贯。信的开头已为你写好。词数:100左右。
Dear Mr. Smith ,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
Dear Mr. Smith, I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life. Our school was built in 1990. There are 48 classes with 3200 students and 280 teachers in it. When entering the school gate, you can see the library with over 200, 000 books. In the science hall, there are many physics and chemical laboratories and four sound labs. The teaching building can hold sixty classes. I’m studying in Class4, Grade 1. The main subjects include Chinese, maths, English physics, chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music, swimming and skating. I look forward you to coming and visiting some day. Yours sincerely, Li Hua.