2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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MY VIEWS ON ONLINE SHOPPING As we all know,today online shopping has been more and more popular. In my opinion.There is no doubt that online shopping is more convenient than shopping in the real stores.On the other hand online shopping can provide more choices and we can find the things according to our needs.however,every coin has two sides.While online shopping has made our life more convenient ,it also has bad effect on us as well as our envirenment.For example,when we see something which is cheap but we do not really need it ,we may buy it because it is so convrnient.As a result,we may spend more money on the things which we do not need.In another aspect,if we buy something on line,it will need some one to deliver our things and if the thing we bought is easy broken,it will cost many plastics to protect it ,it will do harm to our envirenment. Therefore,we should pay special attention to online shopping.And make it more benificial to our life and our envirenment.