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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；能够使用一些不错的从句。
It is universally acknowledged that excessive packaging of goods become prevailing phenomena,such as mooncake box.Goods packaged more beautifully with the same quality. As far as i am concerned,excessive packaging of goods become popular because people like beautiful things. You may think that the mooncake have a quality problem because of bad packaging.On the other hand,businesses consider that more beautiful the goods look,more people it can attract to buy it so that they apare no effort to make goods look attractive. In my point of view,nothing is more important than to make everyone think more highly of the quality than the packaging,In addition,business should be forced to produce goods with good quality and normal packaging in order to protect our environment.Only in this way,can we have a more healthy life
