高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport is soccer .when I was walking back home ,I found a foot ball by chance.And then I played it with my friends .After that I fall in love with playing coccer .I often practice and join in soccer competition .My favorite football star is Britain's David Beckham.I want to be a professional soccer player.