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Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our city. I'd like to tell you something about our city. Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu Province, lies in the southeast of China. It has a population of about 5 million. The city has a history of more than 2,400 years, and was the capital of ten dynasties. It is a very beautiful city with a lot of places which are interesting, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City. It also has many modern factories and high buildings. I'm sure you will have a good time here. Thank you.
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