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Mark went into one of the empty old houses. He saw a door leading down into a small dark cellar. He went into the cellar to see what he could find. Just then he heard a terrible crash. The roof of the old house fell in. Mark tried to open the cellar door. But he couldn’t. So he had to stay there. Mark was saved three days later by some policemen. They used dogs to find him.Mark is very afraid of staying lonily.
