2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(127):计算机的用途和使用

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Computer becomes much popular this century. In schools, factories and office buildings, computers help people to do many works and bring more advantages, they also provide people some communication tools, entertainments, easy shopping ways and other convienences. However, computer still have some disvantages to people, such as using computer long time may result in a eyes trouble to teenagers, some movies may be not suitable for young people to watch, vedio games will affect students' study very much, etc. Then, how to use computer in a proper way? As a student, the advices listed below are very good, 1. use computer regularly and just a short time everyday. Spending long time or without control before computer is not good to your heathy. 2. use computer when it is in need. Teachers may ask to find some useful information or some problems is puzzed you by your homeworks, at this moment computer will be a good helper. 3. avoid more games,musics, movies and chattings. This will squeeze study time out and still will make some problems betweem you and family. of course, some necessary relax may be good for your grow-up if you not go too far. In a short, always control youself and use computer in a right way will help you greatly with your study.