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Nowadays, finical power is the one side to prove the country’s strength. Most of people think tourism is a good way to attract foreign investment. But Everything has two sides . In my opinion, On the one hand, tourism plays an important role in the development of our eco. In some way ,it is true that tourism bring harm to the environment. In my sense, there are two reasons. The one is tourists, the other is agency of government. For most of the tourists, the sense of environmental protection is out of their mind, all of them enjoy in the scenery and ignore what their behavior is danger to the environment. The another is government agency. In order to earn more money and increase fiscal revenue, some of the government destroy the original ecological to develop new tourism. Blindly pursuit the economic growth and lack of awareness is the reason of harm for the environment.
