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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第36篇:你会选择什么样的人做朋友

发布时间:2013-08-14 17:23浏览次数:3278
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Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves.

Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?

有人选择跟自己性格相同的人做朋友,而其他人选择性格不同的人。对比一下两者的优点。哪个会比较适合你?为什么?

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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How choose friends is a problem. Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. I think the standard of choosing friends, mainly has follows several aspects. First, as friends, communication is very necessary. Two people can begin discussing on one thing, whether agree or counter. This is the most basic requirements as a friend. Agree that we are similar in this thing. Counter that we are different from each other in this thing. Agree that we will meet bosom friend feeling. Counter that we also get the useful things for yourself from the other person`s points of view. Whatever, will let us get a lot of useful things. Second, as friends, we can broaden each other horizons. For example, the people grow up in different countries become friends, people can exchange each other different views, different culture, different language and many things. Like this, we come into contact with different people and things, to broaden our horizon. In conclusion, we need a lot of friends. I think not only the similar to ourselves also have different from ourselves.

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