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Dear George, Very glad to have received your letter. Now I’d like to tell you about household hotels in my hometown. Single room per day 30 yuan.A double room per day 20 yuan.Meals per day is 20 yuan.You can eat Chinese food, host family and residents have a menu, can I take your order, also can cook.You can go bathing, swimming, mountain climbing, you can volunteer to not pay greenhouse work.You can also close to understand China, can also feel the family atmosphere. Yours, Li Hua