高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our city. I'd like to tell you something about our city. Located in southeastern China, nanjing is the capital of jiangsu province, a population of about 5 million.Nanjing has 2400 years of history, has ten dynasties established their capitals here.Nanjing is very beautiful, there are many places of interest, such as exhibition and chicken calls temple, stone town, has many modern factories and tall buildings. I'm sure you will have a good time here. Thank you.