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Dear editor, I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars. Supporters believe that the first car is convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation;The second car reflects national living conditions improve, the country rich and strong ;The third car can drive the other industry development.Opponents argue that the first serious air pollution;The second car too much influence traffic and led to more accidents;The third parking problem is becoming more and more prominent. Yours truly, Li Hua