高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Dear Mike, I'm glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here. The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people.The Mid-Autumn festival has a long history.On that day every household family reunion.Families get together for dinner, eat moon cakes, moon. I wish you a pleasant journey and I’m sure you will like our traditional Mid-Autumn Day. Yours, Li Hua