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Today, I am going to introduce to you a novel.This novel is called "The Million Pound Banknote" written by Mark Twain. This story humor, irony, mainly tells the story of an American poor boy Henry Adams in London's adventure.A London two rich bet, lent Henry, a cheque cannot deliver millions watching him how it ended in a month.To a month, Henry didn't starve to death or arrested, but became a millionaire and won the love of a beautiful young lady.