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Dear John, Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, Because I will be busy preparing for an important English test the day after tomorrow.My English has been bad, so this time I work for a long time just to test good point to prove myself.So I can can't come to the party.I hope you can understand.I really want to go. Please allow me to say sorry again. Regards, Li Hua