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湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:47浏览次数:2152
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an English composition on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2.网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题
3.你的建议
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Online Shopping With the help of the ever rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is coming into fashion in most of the cities. Now online shopping has become a kind of fashion.Because online shopping is very convenient, you don't have to out of the house can buy what you want, you can also save a lot of time.But online shopping also has bad side.Shopping on the Internet, for example, not sure what you want to buy something of quality.But also can meet the network liar. I think we have to learn to identify the fraud site, discovered to report to him, to prevent more people cheated.

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