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258 North ChangWu Road Changzhou, Jiangsu, PRC Aug. 10,2006 Dear James, Nice to hear from you again.At the end of July, I took part in the four-day national summer camp for middle school students, in changzhou. Blessed are those who attend the national middle-school student English ability competition winners and China, the United States, Britain, and Australia, English teachers.We hold the English speech contest and the performance of students, for sightseeing, exchange experience in learning English.In the summer camp I could improve the ability of oral English, also made many friends, having a great time. Yours, Li Hua
