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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(124):学校活动

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要求:
根据下面提供的情景, 写一段不少于50词的接续文字。
     Mark is a middle school student. He lives in a tall building in the middle of the town. About a mile from Mark’s building there are many old houses. They are all empty and going to be pulled down. His father says they are dangerous and tells him to keep away from them. However, he enjoys playing there very much. One Friday on his way home from school... 
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词汇表达不够丰富,要增加学术词汇的使用;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段。

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Mark walked into the house.Empty inside, have the wind blew in from time to time, he can't help but feel a trace of fear.To move on but he seems to want to find something.He just went in as far as you not found a corpse, he reported the case to the police at the same time.It involves a homicide, finally the police broke the case, has given his praise.

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