2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(120):交流学生

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Dear Jia Qi, Very glad to have received your letter. Now I’ll tell you about students’ taking the part-time jobs in Britain. British high school students said that Britain over the age of 15 high school students to work in their spare time.They think work no more than three hours a day, not later than 7 o 'clock in the evening, 18 hours a week. I think high school students a part-time can obtain some life skills, such as the form, the interview and getting along with people.Also can enhance self-confidence and independence, to learn how to financial management, good learning and improve the work sense of responsibility. Looking forward to your letter. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua