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Notice To help students learn more about computers,We invited guangzhou university computer science professor wang ping to give us a about computer use and how to use the Internet to learn.The site is in the library on the third floor.Participants need to prepare some problems in computer learning process, let professor wang answer after the meeting. Any computer-lover is welcome to attend the lecture and required to arrive on time... The Students’ Union Feb.28th
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