5.可适当增加细节,使内容连贯。信的开头已为你写好。词数:100左右。
Dear Mr. Smith ,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分;连词使用偏少。
Dear Mr. Smith, I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life. The school was built in 1990, there are 48 classes, 280 teachers, 3200 students.The building can accommodate more than 60 class;The library more than 20 volumes;Science and technology museum has many physical and chemical laboratory, four speech classroom. I enrolled in high (4) classes.Main course: we learned Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.Good at English and computer;Hobbies: listening to pop music, swimming and skating. Yours sincerely, Li Hua