作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.In order to welcome the visiting British friends will we flight committee organized a party there.Time is on April 15, 7 PM and 10 PM Friday night.At school the conference hall.We listen to music, singing, dancing, playing games, exchanging small gifts.Don't forget to pack a small present, signature and write the wishes of the language