高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our city. Nangjing,which is the capital of Jiangsu province lies in the southest of China.It has a population of about 5 million. The city has a history of more than 2,400 years and it was the capital of ten periads.It‘s really a very beautiful city.It has a lot of places of intenest,such as the Xuanwu Lake and the Jinjing Temple. There are also many modern factories and tall buildings here. The Changjiang River Bridge in Nangjing is world famous,too. Now,the people in Nangjiang are making a great effort to build socialison.That’s all. Thank you!