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Dear Linda, How are you getting along? I hope things are going well with you too. Your letter got to me at the end of last moth. Maybe it was delayed on the way I’m sorry I didn’t answer you on time. For these days I have been busy preparing for an exam. December 25th is Christmas Day. It is an important holiday in the United States as well as in the other western countries. On this day, most families get together for a big dinner. They exchange presents and visit friends. The Christmas tree is an important part of the Christmas holiday. Most families buy a tree. Most American children believe Santa Claus is supposed to be an old man with white beard and wear a red suit. Parents always tell their children that Santa Claus will bring presents to all good children.So you should spend Christmas with your family. Thank you for your invitation. But I’m very sorry that I can’t come to spend Christmas with you, because my aunt said she would come to my house on that day. By the way, can you come here to spend the holidays with us? Please give my best regards to your parents. Yours, Lois
