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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1891
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
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文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Hey,my dear ,have you say 'no' to others ?maybe you say,yes i have .However ,when should we say 'no'?well,there are some tips and suggestions; The first of all,everyone wants to impressed on friends, so when someone wants to you help him or her,at that moment,you will maybe hesitate to do a favour for him .my friend,don't be afraid to say no if she or he wants you to do something illegal. Furthermore,we should refuse it without hesitation and tell them we should stop it,or you will put in poison . The seconed ,sometimes we have faced this situation that the thief was stealing and some people have seen it while they did not stop this thing .You will ask the reasons. In my opinion,they afraid the thief would hurt them,as far as i am concernd, i disagree this deed,i think we shoud say no to this crime.

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