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Hey,my dear ,have you say 'no' to others ?maybe you say,yes i have .However ,when should we say 'no'?well,there are some tips and suggestions; The first of all,everyone wants to impressed on friends, so when someone wants to you help him or her,at that moment,you will maybe hesitate to do a favour for him .my friend,don't be afraid to say no if she or he wants you to do something illegal. Furthermore,we should refuse it without hesitation and tell them we should stop it,or you will put in poison . The seconed ,sometimes we have faced this situation that the thief was stealing and some people have seen it while they did not stop this thing .You will ask the reasons. In my opinion,they afraid the thief would hurt them,as far as i am concernd, i disagree this deed,i think we shoud say no to this crime.