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Going to school by Bus or by Bicycle There are basically two ways to go to school. They are going to school by bus and going to school by bicycle. Each of them has its own advantages. On one hand, going to school by bus can save you a lot of time especially when you live far away from your house. Besides, it can also save some energy. Thus, you won't be very tired when you get to school. On the other hand, going to school by bicycle can provide you with a chance to make you stronger and healthier. As is known to all, cycling is a good form of exercise. What's more, cycling is a flexible and convenient form. To some degree, choosing which way to go to school partly depends on the personal character and favour. I think going to school by bicycle is suitable for me because it builds up my body. We must walk on the road every,what must we know? Let me tell you! If you walk on the street ,you must walk on the sidewalk.IF you want to walk cross the road,you must go carefully.If we go by bike,we must catch the handlebar and watch ahead. If you walk on the street ,you must know the traffic rules.
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