文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
In the past 5000 years,Chinese culture always led advanced world culture and influenced many kinds of nations even the whole world. But now,the problem that more and more students pay little attention to Chinese study has become serious.They believe that the study of Chinese is of little importance and they have no necessity to learn it.Obviously,this opinion is wrong. I guess one reason is that the western hot is popular.Students are addicted to studying foreign languages,rather than Chinese.Another reason is that teachers in school do not take responsibilities for their students' Chinese learning.If we don't change this situation,our Chinese culture will be dangerous.That is to say our mother language will possibly disappear one day.So we should protect our Chinese and hand it down generation by generation.