高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

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With the improvement of people's living standard, more and more people have their own cars.Supporters believe：can have the car to go where you want to go，life is more convenient, unobstructed，can also reflect the national living conditions improve, the country rich and strong .But opponents say：The car is much more serious air pollution，car too much traffic, likely to cause more traffic accidents，It is also quite serious parking problem.