- 分享到:
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
As the saying goes, eyes are the window of our hearts. If you can follow the methods mentioned above, you can surely have a good eye sight.This phenomenon must be paid attention to. We should reduce the time of reading and when we read, do read in the bright place so as to protect our eyes. Besides, the eye exercises are another way to keep eyes healthy. After school, we'd better get more sleep so that the eyes can get more rest. Look at the picture and you will find the worrying phenomenon: most students now wear glasses. Because of unhealthy ways of using eyes and high study pressure, students get short-sighted easily. However, we can do something to protect our eyes from getting short-sighted. When reading, make sure you are in the bright place and let your eyes rest every hour. If your eyes are aching, doing some eye exercises can relieve your eye tiredness. It will be good to your eyes to take enough sleep. I believe you can protect your eyes if you follow the tips. Hope every one of you have a clear world!
