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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次较为清晰；请注意分段。
Jack is one of my best friends. Yesterday was his birthday. I searched shop after shop, planning a nice gift or something expected for him. Finally an attractive notebook on the shelf caught my eye. It was the most attractive notebook I had ever seen. On his birthday when he accepted my gift with a few words of wishes on it, he was filled with excitement. He said it never occurred to him that he would get such a nice gift. The gift had great effect on his later life. From the time he got the notebook I sent him, he wrote down something meaningful that happened to him every day. It often reminds him of the true friendship between us, which I hope will last forever.
可可英语 - 划词释义
