高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

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Civilized manners is very important in international intercourse, thus improving the national culture is imperative.To improve national quality is very important，Because only the national quality to improve the social environment will become more beautiful，and that would make the impression of China is very good.I often say some people spitting in park.Or I say people chaos to cross the road.I hope people can to realize the necessity of improving national quality.