2010年湖南高考测试题写作范文：毕业留言

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Dear Li Hua, It’s time to say goodbye. It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need. I'll never forget you. You are an outgoing boy. There's always a smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you. We used to play basketball on the playground. Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there. I always laughed a lot when I was with you .At this very moment I'm saying goodbye to you, Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination. I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.! I hope you are happy and healthy forever. I hope you are successful in the future. Yours, Wang Ping