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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(33):Practice makes perfect

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要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
A dramatic ballad(民歌) singer studied under a strict teacher who insisted that he rehearse (练习)day after day, month after month the same passage from the same song, without being permitted to go any further. Finally, overwhelmed (使受不了)by frustration and despair, the young man ran off to find another profession. One night, stopping at an inn, he came across a recitation contest. Having nothing to lose, he entered the competition and, of course, sang the one passage that he knew so well. When he had finished, the sponsor of the contest highly praised his performance. Despite the student’s embarrassed objections, the sponsor refused to believe that he had just heard a beginner perform. “Tell me,” the sponsor said, “Who is your instructor? He must be a great master. ” The student later became known as the great performer Koshiji.
Koshiji practiced so much that it became part of him. To really master something, it has to become part of you.
[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2.以约120个词就“Practice makes perfect”这个主题写一篇短文,短文包括下面要点。
1)你对“熟能生巧”的理解及看法如何?
2)在英语学习方面,你有何关于“熟能生巧”的亲身体会?
3)你有什么建议?
[写作要求]
短文可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构组织故事,但不得直接引用阅读材料中的句子。
[评分标准]
 概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。
用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
评语:

词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Practice Makes Perfect There is an old saying itl China: Practice makes perfect. Practice is a means and perfect is a goal. Only when you do more practice can you make things perfect. This is true not only in our learning but also in other walks of life. The dramatic ballad student, who later became a great performer, could not stand the repeated boring practice which was to lead to his very success in his career. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Consistent practice can result in perfect performance. Practice is of great importance in doing anything. Another case in point is cooking. A good cook can prepare a delicious meah But you will not be surprised at his performance if you know how much time he has spent practising. Through practice, he then becomes an expert at cooking. It goes without saying that practice makes perfect. Only through practice can one be good at doing things. Since we have realized the importance of practice, why not put it into practice?Take my personal experience in learning English for example. Three years ago, I had great trouble with listening comprehension. I couldn’t understand the teacher in class. This was obviously due to my lack of practice. To improve my listening, I started to read English aloud every morning and listen to tapes and radio programs every evening. My efforts paid off and in the final examination I did an excellent job in listening. I strongly believe that practice makes perfect. Whatever we do,we should persist in it and keep on working until we are successful.

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