词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Practice Makes Perfect There is an old saying itl China: Practice makes perfect. Practice is a means and perfect is a goal. Only when you do more practice can you make things perfect. This is true not only in our learning but also in other walks of life. The dramatic ballad student, who later became a great performer, could not stand the repeated boring practice which was to lead to his very success in his career. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Consistent practice can result in perfect performance. Practice is of great importance in doing anything. Another case in point is cooking. A good cook can prepare a delicious meah But you will not be surprised at his performance if you know how much time he has spent practising. Through practice, he then becomes an expert at cooking. It goes without saying that practice makes perfect. Only through practice can one be good at doing things. Since we have realized the importance of practice, why not put it into practice?Take my personal experience in learning English for example. Three years ago, I had great trouble with listening comprehension. I couldn’t understand the teacher in class. This was obviously due to my lack of practice. To improve my listening, I started to read English aloud every morning and listen to tapes and radio programs every evening. My efforts paid off and in the final examination I did an excellent job in listening. I strongly believe that practice makes perfect. Whatever we do,we should persist in it and keep on working until we are successful.