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Is sport really good for us? Some think sport does us good in many ways. In our life, some people love sport while others hate it. However, most of the time, sports are good for us. Different sports have different benefit. Players get healthy bodies when doing sports. Such as basketball, players get to run a lot and exercise their flexibility. One thing all the sports have in common is they all promote team spirit. Players become sole mates with each other as they work as teams. Sport is also a way of releasing. Releasing energy and all the bad stuff in your body and mind can make you feel better. Sport doesn't mean restless exercise. It's just another way to build up your body and have a healthy life. I think sport teaches us big lessons for life. Most sports involve teamwork and teach us how to get along with others, how to work together to achieve a common goal, and about trust and responsibility. All sports teach us about dealing with success and failure. They also help people learn about coping with pressure and the need to stick with training in order to improve yourself. True, some sports do not suit some people, but there are so many possible choices that everyone can find a sport to enjoy.
