高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；简单的使用了一些复杂句，但从句使用不充分；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

My hometown has changed a lot，but I prefer the original home.In the past my hometown tree-lined, the water is clear, a lot of fish in the play in the water.Simple houses and narrow streets，poor people work life.But now large and small car drive in the streets，Industrial development is rapid, but the environment pollution is very serious，trees reduce the fish disappeared; Pollution control priority.I miss my hometown.