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Nanjing is a large city in China,as the big city,Located in southeastern China, nanjing is the capital of jiangsu province, a population of about 5 million,with 2400 years of history, has ten dynasties established their capitals here.nanjing is very beautiful,there are many places of interest, such as exhibition and chicken calls temple, stone town, has many modern factories and tall buildings.The last I love nanjing,and I want to go nanjing.
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