小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.Her name is Lisa Wang.She comes from America.Sha has a warm family.Her month is a doctor,and her father is a teacher.Her parent very love her.So she often feel happiness.She has brown and bushy hair,blue and big eyes,velvet and white skin.What a pretty girl.In spare time,she likes reading stories,swimming,playing football.She is good at communication.She I very like her.