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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(69):Health

发布时间:2013-08-14 18:20浏览次数:360
要求:

健康一直是人们关注的问题,请以“Health” 为题写一篇短文,谈谈你对这个问题的看法。请注意在你的叙述中包含一下

要点:

1.       健康的重要性;
2.       摈弃不良生活习惯,多锻炼,保持饮食平衡;
3.       乐于和人交往,理解、尊重、包容对方。
注意:
1.       词数100左右;
2.       适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Health Health is far more important than wealth. All of us want to be healthy. First,we should get enough sleep during thenight. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for ourhealth. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruitand vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should havehealthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at onceGood health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career. To stay healthy, we should bear some fundamental principles in mind. Firstly, it is very important for us to keep a balanced diet and eat plenty of fruits and vegetables because they can provide us with rich vitamins. Secondly, we’d better exercise every day t keep fit . besides, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking. Most importantly, we should develop positive attitudes towards life and take an active part in communicating with others. Meanwhile we should understand and respect others and be tolerant as well. In conclusion, if we follow the above advice, it’s very likely for us to lead a healthy and happy life. All of us want to be healthy. First,we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

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