2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will As we all know,everybody want to succeed when they are young.But they ignore what make their succeed.So,today,this is essay will show you that the key for succeed is strong will. Strong will is ensure for succeed.If we do not have it,we may meet the more difficult, the more scared.So when we get into trouble ,we should catch strong will.However,if we do not have strong will ,we maybe make a simple person.Diffent people has different aims.It is said many individuals want to become a successful man that you should make exercise your will. As far as I'm concerned, not only adults have strong will,but also has teengers .As a students,we should study hard .We can read more books to open our eyes and arise our experiences.Besides,if you not ,you know,you will become a simple person. I remember a saying,Where there is a will ,there is a way.So,we shoud know nothing succeeds without a strong will.